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Name: Pumpkwin Seed
Age: 16
Nationality: British
Height: 5ft11
Weight: "Hey, a lady never tells!" *Coughheavy
Weapon Name: Handy clampper.
Personality/Info: She alway has her head in the clouds unless of course she's in the mood to be serious. She's one of those happy pesimistic people when taunting her victims. Shes good with plants and is able to make poisons and medicins from them. She is talented at being descrete, this is important when she needs to withdraw her poisons.

History: Her family are travelers who move from one place to another in order to get plants and use them for medicins or in their defence. Some members of her family stayed in order to keep tabs on things. Although born in england, they had to swiftly moved on after being chased away from people thinking they were "witches" because of the making of medicines, Pumpkwin was only a few months old. She joind SDL to increase her knowledge and talent of medicines.

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:icontofubeast:
Too modern. Keep in mind SDL takes place in the 1500s. You can have SOME contemporary embelishments, but this girl just looks like a lolita Halloween cosplayer.

Also, the "magic/illustion" thing can't fly. You didn't explain it enough to make it a pass, so no. Voodoo is acceptable, Wicca is acceptable, but not outright magic.

Also, Halloween wasn't invented during this time. Please redo your entire character, and do some research first. If you can't do that, please look into another league.

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:iconregless:
Awww the character's so cute, not sure how the judges are going to handle the halloween reference and the magic thing should probably be cleared up. It's a nice character but I'm not sure the SDL will let you in. Good luck regardless.

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:iconzebesian:
Once again with the oh-wait-that's-not-food people. o_-

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:iconlooneyae:
Thank yahs. =D

D= No real magicc. xD

Its the magicians magic sorta stuffs.
:iconlooneyae:
Ahh okay, I'll edit her costume. =D Thank you'hs

Yea, I believe I need to explain the magic thing. It's just like magicians magic. "Hey, whats that behind your ear?"

I sure will, thank you for pointing all this out.

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:iconlooneyae:
LOL. Hey, atleast my skillz are improving
:icontofubeast:
No problem. Be sure to contact us when you've fixed your character.

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:iconlooneyae:
=D I've changed it, is this better? If anything needs changing again I'll do it.

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:icontofubeast:
Much better design.

I'm not sure what "arm clamps" are--could you describe them, or perhaps show what they look like?

On a more technical tangent, I'd say that her arms are a bit too short for the rest of her body. She's also drawn a bit too small to be 5' 11"--with the proportions you used, she looks about 4' 5". You might want to watch how you lay out the face and draw the head, to make sure that it doesn't get too stretched out. If you use guidelines, you can keep everything nice and proportionate. This keeps from you having to hide some of her head with her hair as well.

That's beside the point, however. This new costume is closer to SDL's timeline, and is therefore more acceptable.

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